Sam’s magical journey story

Wow! Sam has clearly put so much time and effort in to writing this story. He has used a range of fronted adverbials (he remembered to punctuate them with a comma), beautiful adjectives and direct speech! Sam is really showing off his writing skills in this writing and I know his mum (like me) is really proud of him. My favourite part, Sam is…’Finally, the exhausted trio sailed home.’ Brilliant Sam.